So there's this dog up the street; a menacing, bothersome dog. It came at me on Sunday, full bark.
It was one more run-in with a dog that reminded of another run-in, so I decided to write about it.
After getting it all down, it was too long and too wordy, so I edited what I'd written. And edited some more.
But there was still one bit that wasn't right. It was too forced, too much.
Does that happen with your writing?
You have too many (or too few) words, but still struggle to find the right ones?
Well, I kept at it until I found the one word that would fix it all: dumbfounded.
Here's the story. I'm sharing it because it's ridiculous and good for a laugh if you need one.
Years ago I was walking with Agatha, my long-earred, droopy-eyed, red and white basset hound. It was early morning and I chose to mix things up and walk through a neighborhood across the avenue.
We were two blocks in when a German shepherd bolted from the side of a one-story house on the corner.
Agatha was a sweet, easy-going dog and she merely raised her head to look at him and continued on her way.
I should have followed her lead, but this guy, with so much barking and circling, getting closer and closer, was making me nervous.
Until I heard a voice.
A woman's voice coming from inside the house. It was hard to make sense of it all, but there she was, peering out from a six-inch gap at the bottom of an open window. With her head tilted and wedged in the opening and her cheek pressed against the windowsill, she pushed her face forward toward the outside screen and spoke again.
"Ask him if he wants a bath," she said.
"What?" I asked (though I was fairly certain I heard what she said).
"Ask him if he wants a bath," she said again.
Dumbfounded, but feeling a bit desperate, I did what she said.
Turning to the circling shepherd I said, "Do you want a bath?"
That dog stopped barking, dropped his head, tucked his tail, and turned back toward the house.
The gap in the window closed.
Until I found that one word, I was writing about how confused I was, how I wasn't sure I was hearing what I thought I was hearing ... blah, blah, blah.
Writing is hard for all of us because ... writing is hard.
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